tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34037941.post7593488911061351060..comments2023-12-16T00:29:00.782-05:00Comments on Dark Parables - Reviews from a Christian Sister: trying to open my mind and see clearly.Carole McDonnellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15443401088634718848noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34037941.post-23575682853796615062008-08-18T08:29:00.000-04:002008-08-18T08:29:00.000-04:00True, you're right. I don't want them to be cold-h...True, you're right. I don't want them to be cold-hearted. I want them to not be politically correct. YEah, trying to keep it geared toward the christian market. Thanks. -CCarole McDonnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15443401088634718848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34037941.post-86488774525167298672008-08-18T07:24:00.000-04:002008-08-18T07:24:00.000-04:00Sorry to hear that illness have strife has been ke...Sorry to hear that illness have strife has been keeping you in a crappy mood.<BR/><BR/>I disagree that all warriors are cold-hearted. I think it depends on WHY they are a warriors. Some believe in their cause, or their leader and will defend them. They may need to fight someone they care about for someone that they care MORE for and it might displease them, but that isn't cold-hearted.<BR/><BR/>I think if you really want the book to appeal to a particular audience you need to tweak it so that it will, either that or you risk alienating that audience and possibly even publishers/agents for that audience. In the end, you need to be happy with what you're writing.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17866730185060307014noreply@blogger.com